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Reviewer: Bananaman1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 7:15 PM Title: Taken
Date: March 02 2016 7:15 PM Title: Taken
I'm liking it so far, though I do have a few suggestions. The plot seems a bit unrealistic. Being put in detention, yeah, but pulling a gun and kidnapping the kid seems a bit extreme. I like how it's going so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Also, small thing, but after a quote the "she said" and "I said" should be on the same line.