Reviews For The Chamber
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Reviewer: Alleycat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2007 7:39 AM Title: Prologue

I love this story so far. I thought that you had already started this back on May 31, 2006 and had up to 4 chapters plus the prologue done so far.  I’m interested in seeing where this version goes as well.

Author's Response:

actually its a story i wrote even longer ago then that. I am just reposting it as I edit the chapters, as I have a number of unposted chapters. 

 I just need to fix them up, as I am a better writer now then i was when i wrote it.

Reviewer: hertinypal Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2007 2:37 PM Title: Chapter Two

Hmmmmm. Did I hear that mom and nicole ae worried? Who is Nicole? LOL I liek the sound of that. i will be watching for more of her. I bet she looks pretty tall to greg right about now.


Larissa is so cold and heartless! I hope she continues to treat her little man as the tiny insect he is!


Keep it up CED.



Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 18 2007 5:01 PM Title: Chapter One

You have gone very far with your grammer Auskafan (interesting name by the way do tell me why). This is some of the best grammer I've seen you use in this story, very high quality, very high.

Anyways, good story, very good and I hope this turns out to be a happy ending when this is all over, mabye with a duex ex machina (the literary device not the writer) form yours truly or not anyway good.


Zalrus IX 

Author's Response:

thanks, I like to thank i improve a little with each story, so by the process of writing 84 stories your bound to pick up a few things. So thanks alot for the compliment on the grammar. Its something i have been working at over the years.

I called it the chamber because there are some scenes when larisa is torturing the main character by keeping in her shoe, and i thought it would be like a chamber, and then she keeps him in a sock and so on. So since he was in these places i thought what would they be like to him, and it would seem like a chamber.  So there you have it.

 I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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