[Report This]Date: March 06 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg!!! What a fortunate man indeed! :) to be given the tasteful ride all the way down to digestive Nirvana for ever more... finally achieving purpose... transported to exist in a universe which knows nothing what so ever. Save... but the orgasmic Ecstasy... of unconditionally surrendering all to the unyielding enjoyment and digesting as a truly worthy snack for the beautiful goddess Lauren for ever more. :) Oh how I would be him without even a second thought. 🍫
[Report This]Date: March 20 2016 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good his tales.
Place complete digestion, it would be very good!
Change in fat and feces.
Date: February 27 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your writing style. Thank you for sharing your work!
Author's Response:
I appreciate your appreciation...much and more to follow!
I thrill at the chance to share my work with you, Dear Reader.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I quite enjoyed the word choice, the story seemed both poetic yet solid on it's own. Would have loved extra chapters, but the story on it's own is exceptional. I must say, I look forward to more writing you do.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOw,
That's a great story.
- It's swift,
- Gives you the destination in the introduction,
- It's written in both the vernacular and the Shakespearean.
- you make the haphazard editing work for you, and don't force accurate description to stall the vivid forward movement of the story.
- “Pain is a death that does not kill,”- it sounded so poetic that I wondered if you stole the line, but it seems it's all your own.
I will keep a lookout for your stories.