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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2016 4:32 AM Title: The First "Accident"

Cool, love the woman first pushing her away with her shoe and then squashing her. I am sure that would happen.
Nice chapter, easy to read.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: khaladhen Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2016 3:14 PM Title: The First "Accident"

Really enjoying your realistic exploration of our favourite topic! :)

Looking forward to the story continuing to grow and become more intimate with the mani characters.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the support. It's nice to hear it's realisitc considering the topic. The story continues to grow, I hope you continue to like it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2016 1:31 AM Title: The First "Accident"

Great stuff!

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