[Report This]Date: June 17 2018 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
It's always good to see an update to this story, I really like it!
And I also see that I forgot to review the last chapters, whil I thought I did that. Sorry for that.
I saw the Gaelin being Guarding thing coming when they broke out of the city and sliced a guard. That didn't look like something a normal human would be able to do.
But its a pity these bullies found our special village and feel the need to punish Annalya and the village for their failures.
I'm looking forward to what happens next, and hope for a quick update!
[Report This]Date: June 15 2018 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Another excellent chapter! As you said, it appears to be setting up the next chapter, but even a shorter chapter like this one was a great one.
Annallya now realizes that she doesn't know everything about Gaelin, but she's been with him for some time now, and has her intuition and gut to trust. Also, as she stated, she's now reached the point where she can no longer simply go back home and pretend like everything is fine. I also enjoyed the bit where the temporarily-small prison guards were quite nervous being around Gaelin. Maybe they have good intuition, too.
One thing I've been meaning to mention in my reviews of this story, has been how much I have appreciated the pacing of it. While nothing has ever been slow, the author has taken the time to let the story unfold at its own pace, and not be hurried or rushed. I cannot tell you how much this is appreciated. Having gone back and re-read it from the beginning recently (all 17 chapters now), I'm utterly amazed at how much it actually does read like a book -- and a major reason for that is the detail and pacing of the story.
Keep up the excellent work!
[Report This]Date: June 15 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
You know, it's not actually as bad as I thought it would be. At least both of them are still alive, and the village seems to be safe, at least for right now. And it seems as though Annallya is not going to take any of what's coming sitting down either. It's all in her hands now.
But interesting bit of worldbuilding in this chapter as well, learning how perpatraitors of severe crimes are held prisoner in their small states. I'm very interested to find out what the other prisoners in the maximum security one get to do to Gaelin. It had seemed that he was going to be tortured by full sized titans, but there's a bit more going on? We shall see.
Gald to see the quick update! Thanks a lot for working so fast! But don't push yourself too hard. Take the time you need. Until next time!
Date: June 15 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good stuff as always. I'm excited to see revolution in the future.