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Reviewer: vanillaTHUNDAR Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 10:18 PM Title: The Fight

Never enough butts. I like it.

Reviewer: OvP Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2016 4:14 PM Title: Found

When is the next chapter comming out?

Reviewer: shrimp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 7:05 AM Title: The Fight

Looks like the mother is about to get involved.  Hopefully He can stay hidden long enough to make an escape.

Is this taking place on Earth or some other planet or timeline?

Reviewer: shrimp Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 4:22 PM Title: Found

Nice to see a story boldly go where few dare tread.

Hopefully will do more chapters SJake!!!!

I'll be rooting for you. :)

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 12:17 AM Title: Losing the Clothes

I like the 3 chapters to get this story off the ground. I don't have anything questions besides. What is the guys name? And looking forward to what's next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. The guy would not know his name because he has no memory when he wakes up in the forest. I was thinking about changing the story to be in second person so that his name would just be the readers name.

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