Date: March 18 2020 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
I knew the story sounded familiar when I went through the first three chapters and saw your comment at the top of this 4th chapter. Ember seems so hot, can’t wait to see more of her
Date: February 23 2016 3:30 PM Title: Ch 3 Curt gets an Angel and a Mountain, Ember's past.
I want to like this chapter, and I kind of do, but you need to work on your proofreading. I'm curious to see what you take this story, I like the idea of giantesses wrestling.
Date: February 15 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 A Date With Ember?!
I suggest typing the story in something other than the actual website, like Drive, Word, or Pages, so you don't have to worry about logging out and wasting 3 hours of your life. Man, I hate that feeling though, don't you? The key component to rage quitting. Anyways, good job with the grammar fixes, makes more sense now. I'm going to enjoy this story. Good luck :)
Date: February 13 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 Giantess Coliseum
Stubbornstain stole my lines XD. This story is amazing but maybe you could fix some grammar stuff lol. Keep it up :)
Author's Response: Had a friend, go threw and edit both chapters, will finish chapter two tomorrow. Thanks for reading
Date: February 05 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 Giantess Coliseum
I kind of like this story. So it's a real shame about all of the formatting, spelling and gramatical errors. Did you proofread? The story could be so much better if you do. You have a nice set of characters and your setting one I want to find out more about so I'll keep on reading.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try harder, and go back through the first chapter and see what i can fix.