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Date: June 21 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 3. A Little Mouth to Mouth

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Reviewer: Aaperture Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

Horrible writing and boring plot. Why are random words capitalized all over the place?

Reviewer: TeamCharmander Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

Love the story!! Keep it going! :D

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 3. A Little Mouth to Mouth

Why hasnt this like 1 star rating? The plot is total nonsense, the grammer is horrible and the chapters are like 200 words long. Why Are you Writing every 2nd word in every Sentence in Capital Letters? Stop That Please. Thank You



Author's Response:

um, you DO know that this is my first story on this site right? I'm merely a freaking beginner, and honestly, I thank you for the critisism, because it helps me improve.

Reviewer: Tiny_guy2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

Personally, I'm ok with the level of detail, but this is coming from someone who is USELESS when it comes to describing situations. I'll let you decide you you want to listen to.

Back to the story though, I'm loving it and I can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

Nice start. I love micro stories, so I am interested in seeing how everything plays out. For the most part the story is straight to the Pont which is always nice. I think if you add some very in-depth description this has the potential to be a great micro story.



Author's Response:

Seriously?! Thank you for the Review! You have no idea how much of a Fan I Am to you, and I'll make sure I'll put more In-Depth descriptions.

Reviewer: MasterOfMicro Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

Not trying to accuse you of anything, but this sounds very similar to an ongoing story I have



Author's Response:

It does? Sorry, but Thats only a Coincidence, Im sorry if My Story is Similiar to your ongoing story.

Reviewer: Oblivious Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Shrinking Fun time

It's a nice set-up so far. Interested to see where it goes. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, You will not be Disappointed.

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