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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 2:43 PM Title: Best Friend

Well done, G-man.

Very good for a first story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 11:35 PM Title: Best Friend

Absolutely rocking first chapter.

All your characters are three-dimensional and you took the time to give them individual identities, but you still got to some awesome shrinking action in the first chapter.

Great job.  Loved Amanda playfull making fun of Adam and calling him a little bitch.  They have a great dynamic, not too gentle & caring, but not too mean and sadistic.

I look forward to more play and more dynamics, and especially to Adam spending some time with his big little sis.



Author's Response:

Thanks. It took me a while to scale his size in a proper manner and I also did research on proper clothing names and I'm glad it worked out. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 9:49 PM Title: Best Friend

If this is your debut story, here, let me be the first to say: well done, and welcome aboard! :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks you so much I'm glad you liked it :)

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