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Reviewer: Aaperture Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 9:49 AM Title: Prolouge

This crap is so bad that not even you wanted to continue writing it. "I'm not going to go into too much detail on what Teresa first did, since Elissa and Hayley did the same."

Nothing makes sense and it reads almost like it's setting up for a punchline.

Also, women don't pee out of their vagina. 

Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 3:52 PM Title: Prolouge



please continue

Reviewer: cai20160302 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 12:22 AM Title: Prolouge

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2016 8:38 AM Title: Prolouge

Really loving this story, nice idea! I'm really into the micro sizes and not a lot of stories do that so well these days...

Please keep this one going, I'm already too hooked to have it cut off T_T

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks a lot, I appreciate it!

I've been meaning to continue but the ol' idea box is running low. I've taken a small break from writing but plan to finish this one and start a new one. 

Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2016 12:48 AM Title: Prolouge

I feel this review is kind of overdue. You're a great author and one of my favorite on the site. I recommend you keep doing what you love because you're really good at it, and this story is good too. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, that really means a lot to me. I'll try to keep my story updates more consistent as well, been slacking on that

Glad you're enjoying the story so far

Reviewer: SmallerThanLife Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 1:36 AM Title: Prolouge

I really like the idea, I sure hope you follow through. Too many good stories left unfinished on this site.

Author's Response:

It's a story I've been wanting to do for a while, and will continue lot's of stuff I love. It has a good chance of continuing and likely finishing

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