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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Old Hatreds...

Ahhhhhhh! So, Pyrrha might be a long-lost sister of Samantha's? If so, the Society has a lot more to answer for than just the original world-wide shrinkage. Enslavement through genetic engineering?!

Shades of Dr. Moreau!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: Allied for Hope

Ah! Good to know. Thanks for clarifying. :-)

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Date: February 13 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: Allied for Hope

I cannot believe how powerful that scene was with Jacob when he sees his father's smile from what we can only assume is his death bed. Actually that whole scene with Samantha and later Kimberly were up there with my top favorites of the shrink act series.

As far as the syringe, I hope that means what I think it means. But even if it does, I think Jacob deserves Derek's laser gun.


aaron
PS
Don't know why but I never considered Alice a traitor but now that she is all I can think about is how Isabella almost met her end in Angela's maw.

Author's Response:

I'll admit that got me choked up a bit when writing it. As for the other part... we'll have to see.

 

Technically, she has been a traitor to the Society for awhile now, just that they didn't know she was still alive. Sadly, she STILL doesn't know Isabella is dead and that Sanders was the one she was protecting back when she thought she was trying to find Isabella.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: Allied for Hope

Whoa! This plot twist doesn't bode well.

Author's Response:

What plot twist? If its that last part, remember that is from the Society's point of view. So yes, Alice is a traitor to the SOCIETY, not to the Resistance.

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Date: January 29 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Anger and Unity

Hoo-boy!

Fit? Meet Shan.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2016 6:46 AM Title: Prologue

It's gonna be sad when this story ends. I won't really have a reason to come back to this site anymore. 



Author's Response:

There are other stories around worth reading. Granted most are of the violent nature, but there are a few more story focused ones.

Reviewer: Dragonling Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2016 2:54 AM Title: Prologue

Its finally here! I can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Hubble Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 5:54 PM Title: Prologue

I WASN'T READY FOR THIS YET!

AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!

 

I still need to read Act 2 a second time before I even dare touching the newest pages of this masterpiece



Author's Response:

Not sure I would say its a masterpiece but thanks all the same.

 

AND YOU BETTER GET READY CUPCAKE, CAUSE THIS TRAIN HAS NO BRAKES ONLY MORE SPEED

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2016 2:59 PM Title: Prologue

Hey-hey! :-)

Welcome back. You've provided us (or, me, at any rate) quite an opening for volume three. And I, for one, thank you for it, immensely.

Author's Response:

Good to be back.

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