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Reviewer: Hubble Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2017 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 15: Reunion

Absolutely loved this chapter!

Pyrrha has hit the nail right on the head when she verbally dismantled Aviel so analytically, I celebrated it quite hard.

Incredibly jealous of your ability to tell stories and to give so much depth to your characters. Can't help but catching myself hoping for a new chapter each time it has been a few weeks. Your story is alive.

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 15: Reunion

Awesome chapter! I'm glad Fionne didn't lose herself like Aviel did, it really gives a glimmer of hope to Sanders' situation to see that he still has friends on the other side! Anyway based on what you say at the end of this chapter I'm assuming theres gonna be an act 4? How long are you planning this story to be?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 15: Reunion

So, Terence _isn't_ the traitor?

Dang!

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