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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: Winter is Coming

Ooooh! The tinies are going on the counter-offensive? Nice!!!

As for those pesky real-life concerns? Like I said in my previous review, feel free to make this the end of Act 3 and the next chapter, the opener for Act 4.

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 13: Winter is Coming

Yes. Abit of downtime! Pyrra saying 'mecha pyrra' was the funniest thing I've read in a while! Anyways great chapter! Hope to see u update soon but I get that real life comes first!

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