[Report This]Date: July 16 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Long Haul
Hey! If anybody's earned a couple weeks vacation from this, it's you. In fact, if it helps, you could make this chapter the end of Act 3. Thereby allowing your next update to be the opening chapter of Act 4!
As regards this chapter? Jody's confession was suitably startling. Did not see that coming, at all! I also liked Samantha's brevet promotion. She can now command troops and, yet, still feel like an enlisted grunt.*
*The perfect compromise for sexist traditionalists like Major Freeman. :-)
[Report This]Date: July 16 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Long Haul
Sort of a boring chapter to be honest, I was hoping that since we got abit of downtime we'd get some sander x pyrra time but no dice. Oh well. It was well written tho, I DID like the part with Gabby, it really struck a cord with me, I guess she's not an invincible steel woman after all...Everyone has their breaking point. Anyway, kinda sucks that we wont be getting another chapter for a while but i'll be keeping an eye out for this short story of yours...