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Reviewer: Tryype Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: Hold the Line

You know what's funny? Ollie somehow wormed his way through and survived all 3 acts.

Also, what happened to Morgan? She only appeared in Act 1, and I'm wondering if she's gonna make an appearance in this act.



Author's Response:

Well Ollie is just a radioman and tends to stay well away from the battlefield. Helps keep himself safe and not caught in the wrong place at the wrong time.

 

And that is a good question which we will be answered. All I will say, is we haven't seen the last of Morgan.

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: Hold the Line

Excellent chapter! I could almost picture what was happening in my head like a Hollywood movie right down to that cheesy melee fight with the last villain. You're one of the few writers on this site that can do action scenes properly, the words and descriptions are near perfect. Anyway, I'm glad we're getting abit of downtime next chapter, I'm hoping for some Pyrra X Sanders shennanegans myself but whatever you gave planned will be good reads no doubt!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 11: Hold the Line

A chapter-length display of fireworks and victorious freedom-fighting. Highly appropriate for July 4th weekend! :-)

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