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Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Second Battle of Rome

Also, I guess I should comment on this chapter. These people need to move somewhere else, that much is a given. The Society can just send and send things over until the city falls! If Alice was around they might be able to use her to carry some people but as it stands they only have Pyrra, I wonder what they are gonna do about this?

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Second Battle of Rome

Finally caught up with this series, haven't read 2.5 yet, but it's kind of an inbetweener so I'll save it for later, but I DID read the rest of 2 and caught up on 3 so as far as the current timeline is concerned I've caught up.

Reviewer: Michael11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Second Battle of Rome

The loosing and learning continues.


"Over 2,000 other Roman soldiers were marching with Hans, heading to punch the Society's teeth in"
"You're right. If those outsiders can beat them then we sure as hell can, right?"
Not like this... : /


Great portray of how an army can fall. And the emotions...

"But sense and reason were two things none of his soldiers had anymore. All they had was fear."
: /

"should have...should have...should have....."
: (

"A sudden wave of relief washed over him as he saw Pyrrha, the platform and its cannon back on her, sprinting toward the battlefield."
Our heros return : D

"Those rifles rumbled out along with the whoosh of rockets as the Phoenixes showed the Romans how it was done."
:P

"They were doomed without his help and he was NOT going to let his past stop him from saving them."
: )

"Hans and Arnold looked at one another and an unspoken agreement went between them."
: )

"Keep it up, we can win this!"
... *doubt is calling*

"And in her mouth was.... oh no..."
*call answered*

"But Lutice broke the glare off with a slight smirk before turning away from the battlefield."
Wonder what that was about

"Of the over 2,000 soldiers who had marched out, less than 1,000 returned."
At least there ARE survivors... thanks to our heros.

"A live fairy…"
cool : )

"I did not expect the "hero" and his master to arrive so quickly."
hmmm... the way (she) talks...

"Your information was put to good use. All scout teams were eliminated."
!!! They need to find that traitor !!!

"I will admit to being eager to see them in action."
Unfortunately I'm too...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Second Battle of Rome

Whoa! The traitor is a shrinkie who OUTRANKS the Swords' commanding officer?

Another diabolically brilliant plot-twist.

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