Reviewer: Michael11 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 6: The First Battle of Rome

This type of review may be strange, but I hope its still helpful.

 

"Ahhhhh~! That feels so much better,"
I think most of us can relate to that ; D

"And if there was one thing he had learned about these Society monsters it was that they LOVED to talk about their superiority. "
haha, they do : D

"Refuse, and we'll make your corpse into a new obstacle"
haha : D

"But what did he expect from a Society member..."
: /

"Fuck the plan and fuck trying to buy time, this devil was going to die. "
urgh...

"If she or Sanders had turned on them the damage they could have done was... well pretty much total."
*nod*

"Besides, it was kinda nice to be doing something that was more inline with his old life... Reminded him of better times...and got his mind off his dead friend."
: )

"I've missed worked with C4..."
: D

"big bad lady", "Sanders' loud stick", ...
Pyrrha's Vocabulary is just great : D

Great how you described Pyrrha's sudden confusion and arousal as well Jessica taking over

"Fuck she was gone, completely and utterly."
: (

"Her sudden shift cause Sanders’ entire innerworkings to feel left behind"
X.X

"A few quick warning shots from the turrets were enough to send both retreating."
: D : D

"The fairy gave her a horrifying, yet innocent, smile as she neared Samantha. "
: /

"Wow she was...impressive, but not that impressive compared to Jessica."
haha, always looking for a rolemodel : D

"Dammit, STOP RESISTING!"
: P

"His, nearly, dislocated shoulder had been worth it.", "You... little FUCKER!"
: )

"Except...she was running on two legs rather than four..."
hmm, jessica still in control it seems


"Sanders! Ummm... what happened?"
hmm : )

 

Nice equipment the Romans got there. Hopefully they are able to keep producing it.