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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 12:00 AM Title: Amnesia 2'11"

Your taking time to enhance the story is time well spent. Reading it makes you feel like you are there.
Later,
Diesel

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Thank you Diesel!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 8:34 AM Title: Amnesia 2'11"

What she calls a "crush," the rest of us would call a sociopathic obsession.

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Yes indeed!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 2:22 AM Title: Amnesia 2'11"

Very cool. You describe it so well. The grabbing of her 2 fingers, the cradling of him like a baby, I can clearly picture it.
Standing in his avengers underwear, priceless.
I also greatly enjoyed Daphne saying, my eyes are up here little guy and her talk of being superior. All true.
Nice chapter,
Diesel

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Thanks Diesel!

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