Reviews For A Determined Life
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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2016 12:25 AM Title: Remain Alive?

Seems like an interesting story. You put a lot of effort in the characters and their feelings. Ethan's adventure sounds interesting.
The part I like about shrinking stories is that in your shrunken state(time of need) you get to see who your real friends are.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah thats exactly what I wanted to improve in this story. In the Screyquid trilogy I felt that my character-development and the interpersonal dimension lacked due to the strong action-focus.

Thank you.

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