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Date: March 04 2016 9:18 PM Title: Preposition
Uhh M/m? Really and then a giant male butt puh i mean ok perhaps there are really people who enjoy this but I didnt expect that to happen in your stories. And that his closest to friends turn that strong against him after they literally persuaded him to shrink for them. I really couldnt proceed reading the whole story.
The only light of hope in that story was the woman in the train.
Sorry, wow this is probably the first negative review i´ve written since i started reading stories on this website. Not because of your writing skill or because of a lack of depth or charackter developement but simply because of a pretty strong change in content compared to your previously stories.
Still give you a 5/10 because its only the content, everything else is fine.
Totally respect your opinion it's not that much of my taste either but I wanted to create some diversity here. But at the moment my motivation for continuing this story is pretty low anyway. Maybe I'll start a new one by times which you like more.
Date: February 01 2016 8:39 PM Title: Risky Reunion
Can't believe I haven't reviewed, again. Your really great at at this! Chapters are well thought out and engaging, also you keep releasing new ones pretty quickly. I like the Samuel character, not many stories have male interaction.
Thank you I really appreciate it :) There's gonna be more of Samuel in the following ones but I'm afraid that I'm quite busy till mid february due to university stuff :)
Date: January 10 2016 12:25 AM Title: Remain Alive?
Seems like an interesting story. You put a lot of effort in the characters and their feelings. Ethan's adventure sounds interesting.
The part I like about shrinking stories is that in your shrunken state(time of need) you get to see who your real friends are.
Yeah thats exactly what I wanted to improve in this story. In the Screyquid trilogy I felt that my character-development and the interpersonal dimension lacked due to the strong action-focus.
Date: January 06 2016 4:52 PM Title: Preposition
Well if it keeps you motivated ;) I just made an account to review this. I really like it and hope that you will continue with this story.
Keep it like that and probably add a little more action next chapter ;)
Date: January 04 2016 11:13 PM Title: Struggling with Reality
I'm really digging this story, it's really well done man, I hope you keep up with it.
Thank you very much it's comments like this one which keep me motivated! I'm pretty slow in writing right now but will release the first part of the next chapter today.