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Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think that this was a really good story, but the second chapter needs a lot of editing. The first chapter felt professionally written with a good pacing. The second chapter seemed rushed and kept changing perspectives while leaving out a few details. If you go back to writing like you did the first chapter then this story will quickly rise to the top given the great foundation that it is written on.

Reviewer: doberri Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

we want more!!

Reviewer: Lil Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love :) Continue your story :D 

Reviewer: Gaim17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

More please!

Reviewer: MasterOfMicro Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not sure how this is G rated

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