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Reviewer: Chiefdude14 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well i think the plot line was great but i would like to hear about the night before he shrank. Like have them go the movies and then have then go get a drink or something. Other then that i don't see anything wrong with the story

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool story, short but powerful! Hope you'll do more with it

Reviewer: eskimo33 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loving both your stories hope you keep writing!!

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2015 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story seems well-written, but I stopped reading when the male giant appeared. The size roles tag should be changed to FM/m (note that the Couples tag might do a poor job of indicating a giant's presence when the story is labeled as F/m and lacks the Giant tag).

Author's Response:

Ah, okay. Thank you for that. I thought the FM/m tag meant a giant shemale. I have changed it accordingly

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