Date: July 10 2017 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well i think the plot line was great but i would like to hear about the night before he shrank. Like have them go the movies and then have then go get a drink or something. Other then that i don't see anything wrong with the story
Date: December 24 2015 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story seems well-written, but I stopped reading when the male giant appeared. The size roles tag should be changed to FM/m (note that the Couples tag might do a poor job of indicating a giant's presence when the story is labeled as F/m and lacks the Giant tag).
Ah, okay. Thank you for that. I thought the FM/m tag meant a giant shemale. I have changed it accordingly