Reviews For The Sons of Men
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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 11:00 PM Title: The Pit and the Price

To me its clear Tryn is more complex than she lets on. She has some concerns over how Soren views her and also, she is hurt he seemingly forgot her name. Why all that? Does she like him in any way? Perhaps she is alone and wants some companionship because so far all she gets is intruders. 

 

I think you should focus on their relationship, it is the most interesting part of the story  to me. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 9:12 PM Title: The Pit and the Price

Good story so far. Tryn is an oddball like Vera, it doesn't seem like she's pure evil or anything but it of course, she isn't a saint either, I get the feeling she'll kill someone without a second thought. Anyway, I'm going to be keeping up with this story now that we have a giantess in it which is what I was waiting for before jumping in any further.

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 6:03 PM Title: The Pit and the Price

Just my luck, finally this story seems to have a direction and its getting back burnered lol

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