Date: January 08 2016 11:00 PM Title: The Pit and the Price
To me its clear Tryn is more complex than she lets on. She has some concerns over how Soren views her and also, she is hurt he seemingly forgot her name. Why all that? Does she like him in any way? Perhaps she is alone and wants some companionship because so far all she gets is intruders.
I think you should focus on their relationship, it is the most interesting part of the story to me.
Date: January 08 2016 9:12 PM Title: The Pit and the Price
Good story so far. Tryn is an oddball like Vera, it doesn't seem like she's pure evil or anything but it of course, she isn't a saint either, I get the feeling she'll kill someone without a second thought. Anyway, I'm going to be keeping up with this story now that we have a giantess in it which is what I was waiting for before jumping in any further.
Date: January 08 2016 6:03 PM Title: The Pit and the Price
Just my luck, finally this story seems to have a direction and its getting back burnered lol