Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm guessing you're from up north (Wisconsin, the U.P., Minnesota)? The depiction of the infernal hell of ice is accurate. I know that this is probably just a one-shot, but if you consider it, you could do a vore-centered chapter of when the girls go inside for hot chocolate. (Mostly because "shrinkles" reminds me of "sprinkles")  Macy shouldnt feel bad, I've lived up here since I was born and I can't ice skate to save my life.

Author's Response:

I'm actually from Virginia. However, funnily enough, I have cousins that live up in Wisconsin. Not my favorite place to visit really, waaay too cold for my blood. It is a one shot but might use the characters and setting again, so who knows? Might write a follow up. Could be fun.