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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful chapter! I love the bond that is starting to form. And hopefully something bad happens to the step mother and sister. There just so annoying and evil.

Anyways can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. The bond is shaping up nicely but we can't forget about the dragon. I'm not sure if Alexa is necessarily evil or just spoiled absolutely rotten. We will get a chapter from her perspective coming up soon. Please continue to enjoy :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

Man, this feels so Cinderellaish, and I wonder what twist will you add to make it something new.

I hope something interesting happens next chapter. (Like Sir George showing up.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom thanks for the review. You're not the first to make the connection but it will veer soon enough and move in its own direction. What I'm wrestling with is whether or not to keep it pg or get grittier and make it an r. As I continue to write it could go either way. As for the next chapter ask and ye shall receive.

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