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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

Another great chapter! I wonder what's going to happen to him. I would suggest you add paragraphs to separate the block of text. It will make it easier to read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. There seems to be some formating issue when I copy the story across to this site as I do write with paragraphs to aid readability, I'll take a look and see if there's something I can do on my end. Thanks again.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward to the next one! I'm hoping to see GTS content soon, but I'm drawn into this world already so I'll stick it out even if you decide to keep us waiting.



Author's Response:

Coming very very soon!

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