Date: February 18 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Christmas Eve
This short story was really nice to read, it is cool you've made a scenario where Dawn acts like her mother : she's a hero. The idea about the potions was great, and since Dawn liked so much being "small" for once, maybe there is another vial in her present ?
I also liked the elf named Amy, she was really lovely ! I'm looking forward another story with this little girl, will it ever happen, or could this be her in the box ? :P
Anyway this short story was pleasant to read, great work !
I wasn't planning to do anymore stories with Amy but maybe if I write another Christmas Special. Of course not any time soo since it is the wrong time of year.
Date: December 16 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 4: To Save Santa
Cute scenes with Lucky, cool to see Dawn riding him and the tidbit about how his spine moves is a brilliant line.
Well it is a trait of reptiles. I thought it would be fun to see Dawn riding Lucky like a horse.
Date: December 06 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 2: Not So Big Dawn
Oh dear, someone must have gotten too much coal in their stockings to be planning something against Santa! Love everything so far, its really Christmasy.
That is the whole point of the story. Glad that you're enjoying it.