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Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Christmas Eve

Hello :)
This short story was really nice to read, it is cool you've made a scenario where Dawn acts like her mother : she's a hero. The idea about the potions was great, and since Dawn liked so much being "small" for once, maybe there is another vial in her present ?
I also liked the elf named Amy, she was really lovely ! I'm looking forward another story with this little girl, will it ever happen, or could this be her in the box ? :P
Anyway this short story was pleasant to read, great work !

Author's Response:

I wasn't planning to do anymore stories with Amy but maybe if I write another Christmas Special. Of course not any time soo since it is the wrong time of year.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 5: Finale

 Wonderful end, Dawn is like her mother in that they both grew through the lair of a villain. 



Author's Response:

Except one villain wasn't in the classical evil sense.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 4: To Save Santa

Cute scenes with Lucky, cool to see Dawn riding him and the tidbit about how his spine moves is a brilliant line. 



Author's Response:

Well it is a trait of reptiles. I thought it would be fun to see Dawn riding Lucky like a horse.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: One Christmas Eve

Wonderful chapter but Santa's not going to make it is he? 



Author's Response:

Hopefully he will.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2015 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 2: Not So Big Dawn

Oh dear, someone must have gotten too much coal in their stockings to be planning something against Santa! Love everything so far, its really Christmasy.



Author's Response:

That is the whole point of the story. Glad that you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: One Christmas Eve

Pretty decent little story so far, I wonder how Santa is going to react to a behemoth like Dawn coming by his workshop?



Author's Response:

Probably with great surprise.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: One Christmas Eve

Lucky is just adorable! 



Author's Response:

Indeedhe is, that is one reason why Dawn loves him so much.

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