Date: July 10 2017 8:16 AM Title: Housewarming by rabbithole
It is a damn shame that the author that picked up after this chapter didn't continue with Kelly and her story arc, and instead just kicked it to the curb. Ah well. This is exactly the sort of reason why I stopped contributing to interactives on writing.com years ago, because there's nothing to prevent someone else from hijacking what I had intended and steering it off in a completely different direction, which made things very frustrating and completely sapped all the fun out of it. At least with the static non-interactive stories you have full dictatorial control over it and its direction, but then you have to do the entire work yourself, and it holds nothing new for you because it was conjured entirely from your own mind. So there are downsides to both approaches, but in the end I believe a lot of people come to the conclusion that it is simply not worth doing either, and quit completely.
Author's Response: Well, if a person wanted to continue that story line then they still can. They simply indicate that they're continuing the story after that chapter but before the rest and I'll move the chapter to the appropriate spot. So it isn't all bad.
Date: June 12 2017 8:25 PM Title: Housewarming by rabbithole
Thank you so much for such high praise. It's even more so coming from my favorite smut writer. Maybe it's because it hits some of your sweet spots (house shrink, extreme difference, ass).
I see where you're coming from on Kelly. I felt I dragged her introduction too long and cut what I planned on writing instead of cutting what I already wrote so her transition to monster was not as developed as I was hoping. But I do appreciate you liking her.
I still think of this whole story as yours so I've gotta decline co-authorship. I'm just a big fan that didn't want to see the series go. Thanks for making this a round robin since there's no way I could've made my first story a self post.
Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Yes, it did hit a lot of my sweet spots. The only way it would be better is if there was a relationship power difference between the giantess and the victims. Like parent and child, young and old, superior and subordinate. Those are good. But yours is obviously still amazing. It does feel weird getting such high praise for my stories but I feel that if you start writing you may get similar fanfare. It's not so bad dragging out an introduction as long as you don't let it take away from the main smut of the story that people want. Well, ,my series are never dead. They're just always on hiatus until I continue them. Maybe I'll continue this one again soon. Though I don't know when. Not exactly a scheduled writer. Thank you, again, for adding such a good chapter to my story.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2017 3:54 PM Title: Housewarming by rabbithole
Wow, I'm simply amazed. I never though anyone would actually add to my stories and that the addition would be so good. For a first time this was absolutely splendid and hit all the right points for me. I look forward to reading some of your future work if this is the level of content your create.
I don't really have any criticisms (And I would feel kind of bad if I did since you did this on my story). Let me think ... Nope, nothing really big stands out. The writing was good. The dialogue was good, the grammar and spelling was better then I usually do. I loved the character of Kelly and how she is so wicked.
Oh, I suppose a criticism was that her transformation didn't really seem believable. She went from a dopey, naive and low brain girl to miss evil do-er. Of course, this sometimes happens when writing an erotica.It's also a minor mistake (If it even is a mistake)
Overall, great addition. This story is now own partly by you, congratulations. Would you like me to add you as a co-author? It only seems fair.
Once again, splendid. Thank you.
ps, I notice you ( v5;° v0;b2; v5;°)