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Reviewer: rabbithole Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2018 10:42 AM Title: Introduction with vore

Hooray you're alive!

Thanks for the high praise it means alot to me. I've liked your longer segments in this series more than the quick moments of this and that. Your ability to build things up really shine in the longer segments.

The nano nose is just a request of mine and can be ignored if putting it in is too much of a hassle. It's not a commission. The skyscrapers is just an idea I threw out since people might want to cover new ground despite the range of what has happened already.

I just didn't want to see this die that was all.

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2018 1:47 AM Title: Introduction with vore

Golly, gee whiz, that was pretty awesome. Once again, I must thank you for an amazing addition to the story. This story would be nothing without those who added to it over time.

I loved the simplicity of the story, how it only really dealt with one act or event rather than several like the last few chapters were. The ocean of sweat was also very good. Just imagining what it would be like to have an ocean of smelly sweat sweep you away is brilliant.

I might have to add a new addition as well soon. I have an obligation to not be lazy with. Perhaps I'll take you up on your idea and use skyscrapers. Maybe a business has a habit of not treating women in their company right so some women protest outside. A little shrinking and that skyscraper might seem a bit more manageable for those protesters. I don't know how I would incorporate nano nose stuff into that story line though.

Anyway, thanks for another addition. Hopefully this will spur another wave of people to add. I'll probably do my part to continue the ball rolling later. I'll let your awesome chapter get some love first.

Reviewer: Liii Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 9:11 PM Title: Introduction with vore

Does anyone else still want to update this?



Author's Response: I may update it one day but not any time soon. I left it as a round robin so anyone can contribute whenever they want.

Reviewer: Liii Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 8:39 AM Title: Introduction with vore

Hi, I'm the guy who wrote Chapter Nine. I'm just writing this to respond to a review Tom Speedy wrote on the chapter, since I'm not the original author and thus cannot reply directly to a review. I don't mean to insult him or call his review bad either, it actually makes a few good points.

In regards to Tom's shrinking choices, you are correct in that his line of reasoning often follows very bizarre and alien paths. He often sees justice where there is none and sometimes empowers people who frankly do not need it at all or causes the deaths of people for absolutely no reason. I consider this a character trait and it fits him mainly being a device to bring about unconnected reality-altering scenarios as the writers see fit. It's been present since the first few chapters and I feel I didn't make him do anything worse than he has already done.

It's also true that he favours women a lot more than men. That's just another facet of his nonsensical thought process and also because this is a giantess site. Empowering a woman who is an awful person is a fairly common fantasy people want to see. 

Tom is also unlikely to improve because this is a round-robin serial with no real plot. You can't really carry a character arc when not even you have any idea what the next chapter might be or who will end up writing it.

 

Now in regards to the sexual thing...we'll see. ;)



Author's Response: Absolutely agree. The main reason I like this concept is the idea of someone having power to enforce justice when what they're enforcing isn't actually justice. It's only their perception of justice. Forcing your reality upon others. And in this story the protagonist literally has the power to enforce a different, unjust reality. And obvious reason it's mainly women is because of the fetish. I have thought about adding some male stuff but didn't think it would fit. Anyway, thanks again for your submission. I really enjoyed it for what it's worth.

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2017 11:00 AM Title: Introduction with vore

Loving this story. Would be cool to see him make a mother and her daughter mega or giga size.

Reviewer: Liii Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2016 12:13 AM Title: Introduction with vore

I've really enjoyed this story and thought it was dead. Imagine my surprise when it updated! Very few other stories do the reality-changing gimmick and I really like it. Are you still open for suggestions?



Author's Response: Oh, trust me, it was. But me and my good friend, Frank, brought it back to life. However, I doubt it will remain too alive since my writing habit is atrocious. Anyway, to answer your second question, yes, I do take suggestions and enjoy them quite a bit. Though I may not use them if they don't fit with my preferences. What exactly did you have in mind. Be creative now!

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 9:23 AM Title: Introduction with vore

I've really enjoyed the story so far, especially the role reversals. The only thing that I can say is that the main character must be disillusional as all get out. It seems that no matter what he does he believes that he is making the world a better place.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Well, he does have ultimate power, that's bound to make anyway a little dilusional. Of course, the idea of making the world a better place is highly subjective. I, for one, am totally in favor of his changes, if you know what I mean =)

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2016 8:17 PM Title: Introduction with vore

I really like your writing, it's unlike any other author on this aite.

The more more more was not a joke ;)

Will you soon be writing an addition to any of your stories?

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 2:08 PM Title: Introduction with vore

More more more!

Reviewer: genbarrison Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2015 10:33 PM Title: Introduction with vore

I agree that bullies are great both in power and forced into submission. I prefer when they're in power in the most humiliating fashion for the victim (inverted hierarchy such as the young dominating the old ) and have some good character development.

A multisize scenario with two bullies (largest playful, smaller sadistic) and one or more victims (the smallest size, prey for the sadist, too small for largest to notice) could include both roles and some unaware.

As you might imagine your shrink ray story is my favorite that you've made. Stacy is a great bully character.

 

Reviewer: genbarrison Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2015 3:56 PM Title: Introduction with vore

Glad you're still writing! Extreme size difference is my favorite. Please make good use of bullies in your story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm taking a short break during the christmas time but I'm still writing a bit here and there. Might get another chapter out in a few days. Or sooner. but probably later. I'm curious, when you mean make good use of bullies do you prefer bullies in power or bullies turned victim. Both are good in my opinion.

Reviewer: paerslemone Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 3:15 PM Title: Introduction with vore

It's not that I'm not a fan, just that I like smaller difference stuff more.  If you were to do smaller stuff, though, I'd like to see them interacting with him, like he changes their size and then they come up and talk to him or something.



Author's Response:

Interesting. I think I have a scenario that will work for that. I did originally have larger size difference but I should be able to easily tweak it.

Reviewer: paerslemone Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2015 9:13 PM Title: Introduction with vore

I'd like to see some stuff with less height differences, personally.  Not necessarilly small gaps, but just not as huge.



Author's Response:

Not a big fan of extreme size difference, huh? That's cool. Small size difference can e amazing as well. Do you have any neat scenarios you'd like to see with some small size difference because I'm far better at coming up with extreme difference story lines

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 10:04 PM Title: Introduction with vore

Im glad you're back master.



Author's Response:

Master? What an interesting title. Yes, I'm sort of back. I wanted to write a story with no plot so technically it can never end and there's no pressure to write a full story. I truly see these chapters as nothing more then jerk off adventures. But thank you for your support.

Reviewer: Niggle Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 5:16 AM Title: Introduction with vore

Pretty awesome story so far, your writing is pretty good and i'm definitely enjoying the story so far.

 

As for idea's how about fusing people with someone's foot/body like FTP or having them tied up, shrunk and worn like a sandal/flipflop?.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 9:10 AM Title: Introduction with vore

I like the premise and the writing is good. Id love a feet chapter but at the moment I have no ideas for you tho :(

Author's Response:

Well, the previous chapter contained some foot so I hope you enjoyed it. I will probably add more since I enjoy a bit of foot. Especially micro foot play.

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