Giantess World
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: September 27 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good luck.
Later,
Diesel
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Author's Response: That was actually the point of both chapters: the main character is leaving behind a log of the events leading up to and during his escape attempt. I'm not sure how long that style will last, but I am aware that it can't go on forever. Once again, thanks for the review. Also, you should really check out my other two stories (if you're into the REALLY dark stuff, that is)
Date: February 24 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
In this chapter it really seems like the main character is speaking to reader. I do like that. I'm not sure that it would work in the 'long run', as they say, but it's a nice idea. I think you could have a decent story here, but the execute it a little off in places. I will be interested to see where you take this story though.
Author's Response: That was actually the point of both chapters: the main character is leaving behind a log of the events leading up to and during his escape attempt. I'm not sure how long that style will last, but I am aware that it can't go on forever. Once again, thanks for the review. Also, you should really check out my other two stories (if you're into the REALLY dark stuff, that is)