Reviews For The Old Witch
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Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 9:11 PM Title: Story Time

Really nice story, especially for Halloween {I read it right before Halloween; but this site keeps logging me out so I couldn't comment then}.

It's too bad for Marie and Alan, afterall Lucida is a witch; but Jaime and Matthew hit the jackpot big time.

Your story reminds me of what I always said: "Who are the two dumbest guys in television history?"  The answer: "Major Nelson {I Dream Of Genie} and Darrin Stephens {Bewitched}, one's married to a beautiful genie and the other a beautiful witch and both idiot guys want to stay at their jobs all day and not play with their wifes' magic".  Once I read you made your witch beautiful, in a unearthly sort of way, I couldn't help but note you think a witch should look beautiful too!

Everyone who mentioned it before is right, the little songs Lucida sings are great.  An interesting added touch that adds depth to her character even in a short story.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it so much man.

Personally I think if a witch is that powerful, especially in the context I used, she could have spells or potions to make herself as perfect as possible. So why not right? Haha. I got really lucky with the song. Googled witch rhymes and found it, was perfect. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 6:00 PM Title: Story Time

Very good, a nice read.

Reviewer: Inwiththebooks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2015 9:25 PM Title: Story Time

A rather deliciously diabolical tale of woe and misery. Very festive considering the holiday. My favorite bit is her little song, added that extra bit of playful terror I do so enjoy in these types of stories. 

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