Date: November 11 2015 3:40 PM Title: Day 06 - Rafael
I liked Gills idea for the constant measuring. Logical. I am sure he will get frustrated looking up at the name Gill.
Having a secret code to send out is a brilliant idea. I am looking forward to seeing how you go back and forth through time. It should make for an interesting story. I check almost every day to see if there are updates.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you for review Diesel. I think you are right about how Rafael will feel when loook the Gill s name up there.
The chapter 5 is all about Stacy, and you told you love her, so i hope you enjoy.
Thank you for check almost everyday, i cant made this faster because i need write in portuguese, translate myself, then send to a girl from England to fix the mistakes, then she send back to me and i publish. :) But i will keep written if people keep reviwing.
If you want help me with this, let me know. I have a british girl who help, but i dont want abuse from her kindness . :)