This is my first review on this story.
So first thing first: being a man, I'm a great fan of lesbian and f/f action(I cannot be helped :)).
Ok, moving on to the real review. I really liked how the main character and giantess of the story, Diane, evolved through it.
At the beginning of the story she was a bullied, sad teenager that took out her frustations on the unluky shrunken girls, and some of them really deserved what they got.
But after she unintentionally killed Lynn, she started to change. She understood that Val was only using her for her twisted purposes, that sometimes a person we like is not what we really expect him (or her) to be.
She realized that she doesn't want to be a killer, but she's become smart enough to understand that Val and Rei might be a future treat.
Another great character is Natasha. It's very uncommon to find mute characters on this site and despite what Diane put the other girls through, Natasha's starting to love her.
In addition, I hope that poor Becky, despite the premature demise of her twin, will get through the whole ordeal (and maybe gettin' her head cured since she is starting to be a bitch to Val, even if she has good reasons...).
I was forgetting: Val must die... or at least she must go to jail for a very long vacation.
These are my two cents but this is your story, so just do your best :)