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Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2016 10:03 AM Title: Divine Comedy

I've been meaning to write a review but have been preoccupied. This will be a very short review; but I love the developement happening in this chapter.

Diana displayed two things in this chapter that really made her character more attractive; intelligence and control-dominance.  Diana came across as a sort of casual Goddess this time around rather than a rudderless victim.  All knowing!  All powerful!  Take into account the girls partook of Diana's forbidden private property and the rath of being shrunk into her toys, Diana is pretty much their true Goddess.  Time to pray girls???

Hopefully Natasha makes love with Diana, preferrably as a tiny.  Maybe even a change in carrying her; from Diana's bra prisoner to her panty prisoner (good name for a story).  Hmmm, perhaps Rei might make a nice little panty vibrator trying to snuggle up to get warm after a couple of days freezing alone.

You mentioned a story exchange.  I don't post my stories.  Simply put, I know anything put on the internet can come back to haunt you in the future, so I avoid it.  If you wish, perhaps we can meet in a forum someday and I can send you one or two as attachments (if that's possible in a forum).  You can do with them as you please, just remove me from any reference.



Author's Response:

Well, glad I cheered you up.

I'm pretty sure "Her Panty Prisoner" *is* the name of a story on here, and if it's not I'll make it one eventually. 

Well, if you want, you can send them to me via email. I'm silentoneyuri72@gmail.com 

Reviewer: LittleAmber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 5:29 PM Title: Divine Comedy

Long time reader, first time reviewer. Love the story! I'm a huge fan of F/f, and this has been great read. I saw in some of the other comments, and I'm sorry to hear about the heart break. Take your time and focus on real life. We'll be waiting for ya when you are ready.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, LA!

Well, then you'll love my stuff, because that's just about all I write. 

It's alright, really. It's kinda depressing that I still get my hopes up every time only for whatever girl I've found to shoot me down or be stringing me along, but that's life I guess.

I really should finish the story, though. I don't wanna be one of those asshole writers who leaves their readers hanging, really I don't. 

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