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Reviewer: MrEnderman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 10:49 PM Title: Unexpected Complications

Since you haven't updated in nearly a month, I will consider one of two possibilities, either you are dead (Which would suck), or you're depressed. If you are, send me an email at mrenderman12345@gmail.com and talk to me. I can be a listening ear for anything you wanna say. Seriously, I'd love to do anything I could to help you out.

P.S. You're an amazing writer!

Author's Response:

Honestly, the world just chooses the worst times to dump on me. Like when giantessworld is on a cliffhanger. 

Seriously, though, it's honestly just more dating issues. I know I should be used to it by now, but . . . I'm turning 23 this year, and I haven't had a single date that didn't ditch me or turn out to be a prank. I'm horrible for making my issues interfere with my writing, but . . . I don't know.

Choreo helps, really, and I try to stay positive, but honestly it's looking like this year won't be any better than last year. GiantessLover122, the user who was supposed to put up a second chapter to "Insect Nobility" (a project that was supposed to have 12 total users and 12 total chapters posted by the end of the year, a goal I thought was reasonable), has straight-up vanished on me, and I don't know where all my good ideas are going.

I'll try to at least resolve the cliffhanger soon. Promise.

Reviewer: RoyStorm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 1:24 PM Title: Unexpected Complications

Sorry to hear about what happened. I'm sure you'll find the right girl one day. Anyway, I just created an account, but I have been keeping up with this story as a guest, and I cant wait for more! I really like it, and I am invested in the story.

 

Here are a few names I'd like to suggest for the next story: Emily, Elizabeth (or Liz, or Lizzie, or any nickname like that.), Stacy, Olivia, and Nicole. I'm not sure if it's an all Female Cast of Characters or not, so I apologize if you wanted a male name in there as well.

Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2016 2:52 PM Title: Unexpected Complications

Look who's back!  I apologize for the late review, been busy myself even though I saved this over to my computer a while ago.  I haven't worked on any of my stories either (none ever posted).


I'm sorry to hear about your heart break, that's sad and you deserve better.  She's out there, somewhere. 


 


Pleasent new chapter.  Too bad Diana doesn't take the dealer up on his offer of a few tinies to kill, even if they are guys.  Heck, once she shrinks them and takes them home, no one would know if she simply drops them in her toilet and leaves them there till she has to go or if she shrinks them down double small for the girls to brutalize and take out their frustrations on.  That would even be a nice side business for Diana if she could convince some or all of the girls to fulfill "requests".


 


You do like the drama in your stories, don't you? First Val, then Natasha and now Becky.  If Becky truly wants to get on Diana's girlfriend list, she should suggest someplace a lot more personal to snuggle; or just out and out crawl down inside Diana's panty.  It would make for a nicer home than the table top.


 


The thought of being in Diana's mouth is interesting, perhaps she could make one of the girls her lollipop (a long stick up her hiney optional; but nice touch).  We all like the look of a sexy woman licking a big all-day-sucker, well what if Diana's lolly happens to be alive and a permanent-sucker.  HA HA, just thinking of Paris waddling around hunched over with a long pole sized stick, one end far up her butt, the other end dragging far behind her.  Hmmm, maybe the bottoms of her feet could be glued to oposite sides of the stick so her legs are bent and wide open as if presenting her "crotch" for Diana to lick (might as well glue the stick up her butt too).  She would be stuck as a lollipop!!!!!


 


I still think Val should be collared, leashed and led about on all fours (due to her broken ankles).  Does Becky want to muzzle a pet bitch???


 


Names: Suzie, Stacey, Wendy, Cathy, Lana (Lana the Lollipop, he he he) Melissa, Isabela, Andrea, Mia, Julieta, Nicole.....


 



Author's Response:

I hope so, DW. I hope so.

I was sure you'd start asking questions about this mysterious whoever-the-fuck dealer. But nope, nobody wants to know mystery dealer, which is good because I don't have much to tell XD

I AM MADE OF DRAMA! Seriously, though, this is mostly to showcase how far Val is willing to go to fuck shit up, more than Becky being a serious contender. As Val assumes, she hasn't a chance.

My, my, more of your interesting ideas. A story trade might be a good idea with you.

Oh, Becky wants more than to muzzle a bitch. Becky wants to choke a bitch.

I'll take those into account.

Reviewer: Senital2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2016 4:37 PM Title: Unexpected Complications

Well.... Cliff hanger.

I LOVED the story. Loved the entire thing. Made me realise that I have a super long way to go on my whole writing these types of stories before I can consider myself as good as you are.

I loved the entire thing. IT has so much depth and thought and character development. You're doing great! 

A note for name: Chloe. Annebelle. Evelene. Just a couple. Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Um . . . well. To be honest, I don't even consider myself all that good- that honor (at least in my mind) would go to people who are much, much more in tune with how this site as a whole works. I'm just a plot girl, honest, and not even a good one- pretty much everything I know was gleaned from roleplaying and from my IRL "mentor".

That said, thanks for the compliments! I'm glad to know people like what I write, and hopefully you'll stick around to the end!

Thank you! I'll be sure to use at least one of those suggestions! 

Reviewer: MrEnderman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 1:45 AM Title: Unexpected Complications

Finally! The wait is over, and I swear if you leave me waiting like that again, I will punch someone (Only half-joking). Seriously though, I checked your page every day for the past month if you had updated. Anyways, keep the chapters going, they're wonderful. I can easily say that this is one the best, if not the best story I've seen on wattp- I mean giantessworld. Hell, this is more interesting than anything else on their anyways. So, happy writing, and get me that next chapter quick!

P.S. I hope you're feeling better, and that whatever's causing your depression stays away. Have a great rest of your day!

Author's Response:

Oh, geez, don't mean to incite violence. I was raised a good girl, damnit!

Yeah, I was depressed because I tried my hardest to find a girl, any girl that would date me. Got my hopes up because I landed one date . . . and she told me to hit the curb. My soul still hurts just thinking about it. 

I'm working on it, don't worry. Pray for me to find a girlfriend (or at least a fuck buddy) so that I don't fall into the self-pity spiral again!

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