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Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2015 1:52 PM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm

Not to harp on the subject; but any woman who would say that to you is not the type that you really want to be with. Crush in your sex {don't want to talk crude about your person} maybe.  Though reality is they're not worthy of you beyond your disdain.

You'll find her, someday ; )    

Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2015 11:21 AM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm

I go away for a bit and come back to TWO new chapters.  Oddly enough, I'm sick too; just like Diana {minus the murderous, lust filled, drunken stupor}.

 

"Ouch!" for Anne.  If I were to die as a tiny in a beautiful woman's pussy, I think I'd probably want to go by way of drowning in her sweet nectar.  Admittedly the quick crush showcased Diana's physical dominion over her tinies, too bad the crunch didn' give her a little orgasmic spasm. Or did it???

 

You say Diana found out about Val; but who remembers what happens during a drunken stupor {The worst words to hear: "Do you remember what you did last night?" followed by a close second "The test came out positive!" (Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha) }.  Just saying.

 

Will Val be able to redeem herself if Diana does in fact forget the evening's events?  Or if Diana remembers, will Val stay in the glass as Diana makes herself a protein smoothie for breakfsst?

 

It will be one heck of a morning for Diana, waking up most likely hung-over and still sick with Anne's crunched, dead body in her pussy AND the knowledge, if she remembers, that Val lied to and used her.  How will Diana dispose of Anne's body?  Maybe as part of her breakfast too.

 

You know with Val's ankles broke, she would be forced to crawl around on all fours like a doggie.  That is unless Diana carries her everywhere while they heal.  Since Val is a bitch, might as well collar and leash her up as one. {Yeah, I have that fetish: "arff arff arff"}.  Question is, who would be the one holding her leash?

 

They may have discussed it earlier; but I didn't see any misgiving by Natasha at the mention of going on a date with Diana or that she "has a thing for" her.

 

 

Hey, two chapters ago you had Diana say "I'm already big and ugly"; since you relate to Diana, well actually you're her - she's you, you don't really think that way about yourself do you???  I don't know what you look like; but for some reason I doubt you're even remotely unattractive and are much to hard on yourself if you should erroneously believe that.



Author's Response:

The world may never know. But seriously, I've kinda always been partial to the idea of just being smashed inside another girl. The idea of drowning terrifies me, if I'm perfectly honest.

Even if Diana forgets, the other girls will be right there to remind her.

Oh, Val is most certainly fucked no matter which way you slice it. While Diana doesn't own a blender (I STILL don't, actually), perhaps snacking on the bitch would be ideal, eh? Only one way to find out . . .

I honestly hadn't put much thought into the disposal of Anne's body. I mean, obviously it has to happen, but it's just not something one thinks about often. But yeah, Diana's got a shitty day ahead of her.

Oh, you'd be surprised what I've come up with for Val. 

Even if it was in her head to object, really there's no other choice the way the girls see it. Because, if Diana's not dating one of them, she might go out and get a real girlfriend, and given Diana's personality . . . she'd probably get with someone with a serious beef with the Bitch Brigade.

I don't THINK, I KNOW. Put bluntly, I wouldn't date me. I'm awkward, I have fucktons of scars because I'm an idiot, my left hand just straight-up doesn't look right, and . . . however much of a chest you think Diana has, you're probably overestimating. I've had girls tell me to my face that they couldn't get drunk enough to sleep with me. So yeah.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2015 10:32 PM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm

Geez, you should've been dead. So how'd you liver take it?



Author's Response:

I still don't know. No medical insurance. I haven't seen a doctor or dentist or anything since I was 17. I'm alive, I guess. I had the world's shittiest hangover, though. 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2015 9:28 PM Title: Phase Three: Watch the Shitstorm

DING DONG THE BITCH IS DEAD. Unfortunately, if Diana really is "drunk" drunk, as opposed to a little loopy, chances are she'll only remember about a quarter of these events in the morning.



Author's Response:

Unless you're talking about Anne, Val isn't dead yet. Utterly, horribly fucked, but not dead.

Well, what's the largest bottle of cold medicine you've ever seen? Now imagine that as really strong alcohol. That's what happens to cold medicine after its expiration date. All the ingredients start to ferment stupidly fast, simultaneously. After about a year, you have Everclear.

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