Date: December 14 2015 10:47 AM Title: Phase One: Line It Up
I like the parts about Natasha snuggled in Diana's tight shirt and swaying to sleep. Maybe, if Natasha's smart, she'll ask Diana to put her in her panties; get her excited and perhaps thinking of someone other than Val as a turn on.
Perhaps Natasha will tell Diana that Rei is in charge of their group. If Diana truly wants a domineering woman than Rei is a better choice than homocidal Val.
If Anne is going to remain confined (fingers crossed she will) then dropping her in Diana's used sweat socks which would then be knotted and hung up out of the way so she's left to smell Diana's foot fragrance (calling a woman's foot fragrance her foot "odor" is such a misnomer in my opinion. The scent is too beautiful to be called an odor) would be nice. Her knotted inside one sock, then that sock knotted inside the other so the air is heavy with the smell of Diana's feet and exscape is simply impossible for her.
Rather than hang her up, put the socks with her knotted inside back in the glass. That should really concentrate the fragrance and eliminate any fresh air from her nose and lungs. This is just a suggestion; but please keep the story going the way you want.
You know, Natasha could always train Diana to respond to her hand jestures like a lion or tiger trainer. SNAP that tiny whip! Imagine Natasha sitting atop Diana's head on a combination head harness - saddle, pulling her rains and kicking her spurs.
Author's Response:
I like the way you think. Really, I do.
That's one way of going about things. Will Rei reach the same conclusion you did with the information that Diana likes being put to task?
Oh, there's a plan for Anne, alright. In fact, funny thing, even if I'm flooded with requests to save everyone else from being punished, Anne still has at least one more thing coming. So yeah.
You are a foot guy, geez. I've never seen someone so . . . enthusiastic about something before. It's pretty refreshing to see someone who isn't all subdued and wannabe cool. You know what you want and go for it.
Now I'll have that picture in my head all day.
Date: December 13 2015 12:59 PM Title: Phase One: Line It Up
Please keep Natasha alive.
On a related note, Diana could have Val love her all she wants, so long as she has somewhere dark and secluded, like a lock box. Val would succumb eventually.
Author's Response:
You'd be surprised what the plan is. It's dirty, it's fucked up, and it's hilarious, and I can't wait to get there.
Oh my, you REALLY don't like Val, do you? Something about killing Penny made her dead to you. I'm guessing.