Date: February 04 2016 9:24 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
I love this, it totally sidesteps the whole "how does shrinking work?" question, and has some super odd social dynamics.
Plus, hot.
Date: December 11 2015 9:06 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
Oops, I wrote Trish instead of Diana. I copy clip the stories here into word documents so I can adjust the page and spacing of the paragraphs. In other words it's easier for me to read the stories from word than on this page.
Whenever I do, I change names when they remind me of someone I know. Imaging reading a hot, sexy story and one of the lovers has one of your parents names. You get my drift.
So with that in mind, I change the name from Diana to a, shall we say less family oriented Trish.
Author's Response:
OH. That makes sense.
Disregard the last part of my response, then.
Date: December 11 2015 8:39 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
Penny flatened, well like a Penny. Did Diana really go to bed just now with Penny's remains on her butt cheek? Cruel, yet intriguing image.
It sure was a violent chapter. Two killed in the span of a few minutes.
Now you say you relate A LOT to Diana. So I ask, do your feet really get so sweaty they could drown a tiny? HA HA HA HA HA You should bottle it, lots of people would love to kick back with a nice refreshing bottle of Lady's Foot Sweat!!!!!
Now Rei is taking over the remaining 7 Samuria. Considering Diana's recent murder spree, perhaps Blake's 7 would be more appropo {70's-80's sci-fi} She better watch it, leaders don't seem to last long around Trish. But hey, she even inspired Becky to stand up. Will Rei figure out Diana wants to be a tiny for a domineering girlfriend?
Val is a real bitch. Did you model her after someone in particular?
Trish seems to be breaking down with a conscience. Maybe being bitched around has it's limits with her. After all, she probably wants some physical domination as much as the verbal humiliation cast upon her. Hard to do with a single tiny; but 7 or 8 Liiliputions could always tie her down and have their way.
Keep it up, you're on a marathon roll with this story.
Author's Response:
I hadn't even THOUGHT of that . . . nnf.
. . . Yeah, actually, I sweat a lot. Back before I came out and my parents disowned me, they bought me one track uniform for every day of the week, because they thought track met every day. So, I still own seven shirts and shorts with my school's logo. Back on topic . . . I wouldn't even know where to start with that one.
At this point I'm starting to feel silly for naming characters that are just gonna die stupidly fast. And that is quite the question, isn't it? Bigger one: who do you think is going to take on the role of potential Val replacement?
Yes, actually. There was this girl I knew that my friends called the Empress. She bitched me around, made me think I had a chance, and then . . . kinda stomped on my heart, really. There's a reason my left hand is still fucked up, to this day.
*blushes* I LIKE that mental image. Thank you for that.
Why, thanks!
Question: who the fuck is Trish? I get it from the context, but . . .
Date: December 11 2015 1:01 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
why you gotta do this to me?
I honestly would've liked to see Penny live a bit longer but you gotta do what you gotta do, I guess. *sob* MY WAIFUUUUU!
Author's Response:
Did you even read the name of the chapter?
Yeah, surprisingly Penny could have been saved, she's marked here in my notes with a question mark which tells me that her death isn't completely necessary to the plot. The only request I got with her changed the WAY she died, not that it happened (originally she was gonna be eaten, too).
It's okay, it's okay. Actually, the fuck am I saying, I'm turning into a regular . . . what is the name of that guy who does Game of Thrones?
Date: December 11 2015 12:56 PM Title: From Bad to Worse
*begins sobbing uncontrollably* *runs facefirst into a wall*
[Report This]Date: December 11 2015 10:48 AM Title: From Bad to Worse
Ah, you remembered! :)
Now, my part of the bargain I believe was to do a commission for you. I was thinking Mai / Shadow Realm for Yu-Gi-Oh, maybe a bit of the Harpy Lady Sisters.
You'll have to elaborate on what you mean by the elements, I could totally go for something a bit fantasy realm. If you're looking for specific character types, I've a decent idea of what to write.
However, if you have a bit of time, could you have a look at Thornton Chronicles. It's an old enough story that I put up, but it does have a bit of dominant F/f on it with Alisha. Anyways, let me know what your thoughts would be and I'll get started on your story right away. :)
Thornton
Author's Response:
Never would have put it out of my mind.
Sounds . . . interesting. I admit, it's been a long time since I've watched DM (the first series of Yu-Gi-Oh), but I remember Mai and her Harpies.
It's a character archetype trio, that is also usually accompanied by the actual elements: Fire is Passionate, someone who gives in easily to emotion (regardless of what that emotion is, usually anger or love); Ice is Detachment, someone who is either emotionless or lacks empathy (meaning that the character is either a sympathetic one who's been traumatized into being a shell, or a villainous one who is sadistic, psychopathic, selfish, or some combination thereof); Lightning is Directness, someone with highly straightforward goals, who typically knows what to do and how to achieve said goals, usually at the expense of everything else.
I'll give it a look.
Thanks!