Date: December 03 2015 9:41 AM Title: Revelation
DANG! The story turned really dark, fast. Val's quite the evil little bitch. I was hoping she would actually like Diana back and not simply pretend to. Guess I'm just a romantic at heart.
I was surprised Val just wants Andrea killed, and so quickly. Is Diana just going to smash her with her fist? One would think that Val would want Andrea to suffer, maybe stuffed up Diana's butt and left there for good where the effects of the shrinking potion will keep her alive indefinitely (ok, that's my personal fantasy; but I am both a pervert and worshipper of the female derriere).
I'm also a bit suprised Val hasn't used Diana for her own personal pleasure. Let's say sitting on Diana's lips and gettting tongued while Diana pleasured herself earlier.
Hmmm, perhaps Val could order Diana to make all the other girls have a massive orgy so they know what it's like to be with another woman. Any who refuse she could tape face first to another girl's privates.
Ha ha ha ha, the mention of being taped to one another reminded me of The Human Centipede. Perhaps Diana could tape a few together as a human centipede and let them crawl about like a perverse pet.
Anne under glass is a nice image. Maybe Diana will pee in the glass with her still in it; or tilt it up slightly and fart in it so Anne will have to smell it in (hopefully not killing her; but it's your story).
Great story as usual. Hope you are doing well my friend!!!
Author's Response:
If you outright request, I will write. Not sure how good I'd be at most of it, but I can do as you ask . . . provided you ask. While a few of the girls have locked-in fates already, the others are up for grabs. A list of everyone is in the end notes of last chapter, if you want.
As am I, but I'm also a stone-cold realist a good chunk of the time. Shit's gonna go worse before it gets any better.
In any case, I'm glad you like it, and I hope you enjoy it as it continues!