Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2015 11:37 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine

Fantastic story.  I really like how Diane submits to Val.  It would be great if Val becomes Diane's Goddess. 

 Since I like human-dog play, Diane barking like Val's Chihuahua earlier was a nice touch.  Since Diane told Kayla to do this before and Kayla lost then reneged on her bet; will Kayla now follow Diane around worshipping the ground she walks on and being her "bitch" just like a puppy?  Perhaps kissing each spot Diane has stepped on.

 

 Evy's death was a bit saddening.  Not so much for her demise as her death leaves Diane with one less tiny.  Too bad they're not indestructible.

 

 Keep up the terrific work.

 

 On a side note, reading that you're a woman writing shrinking stories {"disappointed in her lack of new reviews"} was surprising and quite exciting.  Knowing that real women exist who would like to shrink people, even if possibly only other women going by this story, is sweet news to hear.  Thanks for being you!!! 

 

Author's Response:

I hope hope hope that you enjoy the story as it unfolds, but NO SPOILERS.

Perhaps . . . I might have been given an idea.

Remember: Diana is the only character who knows the exact effects of the shrink perfume, because she bought the stuff. So there's that.

Well, yeah. I surprise a lot of people. Especially because I'm like Diana- tall and kinda butch-looking, but this complete and utter pushover. I swear if I was straight I'd own this community like nobody's business, but no . . .

Thanks for reading, and for the review! 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 12:26 AM Title: Your Definition, Not Mine

WHOO! Stupid cunts get what they deserve! Kayla's logic is infuriating in an accurate way, she accuses Diana of raping her yet she had the logic "if you cum you liked it" which is an excuse a lot of rapists use upon confrontation, similar to "but she/he was ASKING for it!"

Author's Response:

Yeah, this particular chapter was a guilty pleasure to write. To quote a friend of mine, "Most people tend to be stupid as hell, holding ideas that make you wonder how they've lived this long."

Did you know that a lot of people, rapists or not, have that same logic? Never understood it.

Thanks for reading, and for the review!