Date: December 12 2016 7:42 PM Title: Here It Comes
Good chapter, added cliff hanger gives effect. Besides, not everyone knows about how hard it is to write a chapter of any story, I appreciate your intent on not leaving things behind like I've done.
Just figured out you are 17. I'm 18 myself so... have fun in this GTS world, if needed be, help, anything, I can help a bit. Just contact me and I'll do my best :)
Thanks for the compliment. I have had a hard time trying to get this thing afloat, and I appreciate every bit of motivation I get from this community.
Actually, I recently turned 23. However, the main character in this story is based on how I was at 17, up to and including the self-esteem issues.
Date: December 03 2016 11:44 PM Title: Exchanging Kinks
Its a great story thus far!!
Read it today and was really impressed at the versatility of your writing, you have my praise.
As as an avid reader and writer I would suggest closing it with just 4 girls surviving, leaving them completely trusting Diana. In my persoective you should end Val and Kayla in a way that Diana is not involved, like they fight off and fall together a great height and die, something like that, but thats not the point, write what you are comfortable with, its better that way. Just kill off Val, she pissed me off from day one. Keep Natasha and Diana together too, such a sweet couple, kinky and innocent, dont't get Diana to prison when they get bigger neither, would kill the mood. Well that would be enough from me, love your work though, incited me to read your other works.
Have fun and write on, I'm expecting with an open mind the next chapter.
Date: November 30 2016 6:01 PM Title: A Small Introduction, of Sorts . . .
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Date: May 07 2016 9:04 PM Title: Fuel of Dreams
Another interesting chapter. As for what to fill the days with, some Natasha x Diane smut would be... Nice (Don't judge). As for the project status, I say you have a really good vibe going here in this story that you made yourself, take suggestions from this story's community, but keep it your's, not anyone else's.
Why do you keep expecting me to judge you on Diana/Natasha smut? Honestly, you forget I basically want the exact same thing. If I had a girl like Natasha into me, my mind would be constantly writing smut between us until we actually got to do the smut things. Trust me, I am in no position whatsoever to judge someone having a thing for HLA.
I'm just nervous, is all. I might not be able to put out a chapter in a couple of weeks, because I'm wondering whether to skip those days. There's only so much time I can fill with smut in a story about a bunch of teenagers before I start getting put on a watch list or something XD
Date: April 21 2016 3:49 AM Title: Ohms and Friction
This is my first review on this story.
So first thing first: being a man, I'm a great fan of lesbian and f/f action(I cannot be helped :)).
Ok, moving on to the real review. I really liked how the main character and giantess of the story, Diane, evolved through it.
At the beginning of the story she was a bullied, sad teenager that took out her frustations on the unluky shrunken girls, and some of them really deserved what they got.
But after she unintentionally killed Lynn, she started to change. She understood that Val was only using her for her twisted purposes, that sometimes a person we like is not what we really expect him (or her) to be.
She realized that she doesn't want to be a killer, but she's become smart enough to understand that Val and Rei might be a future treat.
Another great character is Natasha. It's very uncommon to find mute characters on this site and despite what Diane put the other girls through, Natasha's starting to love her.
In addition, I hope that poor Becky, despite the premature demise of her twin, will get through the whole ordeal (and maybe gettin' her head cured since she is starting to be a bitch to Val, even if she has good reasons...).
I was forgetting: Val must die... or at least she must go to jail for a very long vacation.
These are my two cents but this is your story, so just do your best :)
Date: April 20 2016 9:46 PM Title: Ohms and Friction
Another great chapter, a little less action then usual, but still enjoyable. Would enjoy a bit more smut (What can I say? I'm a perv.), but the story is good without it too. Overall, just keep doing what you're doing, and I'll keep reading and reviewing.
Date: April 20 2016 4:18 AM Title: Better Than 3D
Hello Silent-one, how are you doing on this fine day ? 'Kay I just woke up,that cheery attitude will most likely not last :D. I just wanted to tell you what a fine job you did with that story. Varied characters and situations, good balance of description and action, it's a really nice read.
It was good enough to make me finish reading it, even though i really usually hate death and torture in stories. It even got me to start writing a weird thing. If it leads somewhere I'll tell you more about it. Anyway, thanks for sharing, I'm gonna check out the rest of your stories now :)
Date: April 17 2016 11:27 PM Title: Swept Up and Thrown Down
I don't know if it's the fact I have to wait so long in between chapters, or if these words on this electronic page are just that damn interesting, but I love it! Seriously, I absolutely adore this series, and I am dreading another 3 month long wait for the next chapter, so PLEASE don't make me wait that long, I may die of inpatience.
Thanks, you're making me blush. Honestly I don't think I'm all that interesting compared to some of my own favorites on the site (special shout-out that will probably go ignored to Rhythmear and SpookyTaco), but if you like what I write, I'm happy.
I'm hoping I'm not going to have another pause like that, but honestly every time my psyche takes a blow my hiatus gets extended. So, after two people abandoned "Insect Nobility", and by extension me, in a row . . . it hurt. A lot. Which meant that I didn't feel like writing. Honestly, the best you can pray for is for Shrunken Scholar to add his chapter to that mess soon, or for a new thing to come out from one of my favorite writers, to make it so I'm happy and ready to write.
That said, the next chapter will come out sometime this week. Hopefully.
Date: April 13 2016 1:38 PM Title: Swept Up and Thrown Down
I mean logically Diana could have left Natasha on the table and put on a straight face then ask Alex if she's high or has a history of mental illness in her family when Alex addresses the fact that Natasha was on the table. I doubt people would believe anyone who said they saw a three inch tiny person. They'd automatically go to "She's just nuts."
Date: March 08 2016 10:03 AM Title: Divine Comedy
I've been meaning to write a review but have been preoccupied. This will be a very short review; but I love the developement happening in this chapter.
Diana displayed two things in this chapter that really made her character more attractive; intelligence and control-dominance. Diana came across as a sort of casual Goddess this time around rather than a rudderless victim. All knowing! All powerful! Take into account the girls partook of Diana's forbidden private property and the rath of being shrunk into her toys, Diana is pretty much their true Goddess. Time to pray girls???
Hopefully Natasha makes love with Diana, preferrably as a tiny. Maybe even a change in carrying her; from Diana's bra prisoner to her panty prisoner (good name for a story). Hmmm, perhaps Rei might make a nice little panty vibrator trying to snuggle up to get warm after a couple of days freezing alone.
You mentioned a story exchange. I don't post my stories. Simply put, I know anything put on the internet can come back to haunt you in the future, so I avoid it. If you wish, perhaps we can meet in a forum someday and I can send you one or two as attachments (if that's possible in a forum). You can do with them as you please, just remove me from any reference.
Well, glad I cheered you up.
I'm pretty sure "Her Panty Prisoner" *is* the name of a story on here, and if it's not I'll make it one eventually.
Well, if you want, you can send them to me via email. I'm email@example.com
Date: March 02 2016 5:29 PM Title: Divine Comedy
Long time reader, first time reviewer. Love the story! I'm a huge fan of F/f, and this has been great read. I saw in some of the other comments, and I'm sorry to hear about the heart break. Take your time and focus on real life. We'll be waiting for ya when you are ready.
Well, then you'll love my stuff, because that's just about all I write.
It's alright, really. It's kinda depressing that I still get my hopes up every time only for whatever girl I've found to shoot me down or be stringing me along, but that's life I guess.
I really should finish the story, though. I don't wanna be one of those asshole writers who leaves their readers hanging, really I don't.
Date: February 21 2016 10:49 PM Title: Unexpected Complications
Since you haven't updated in nearly a month, I will consider one of two possibilities, either you are dead (Which would suck), or you're depressed. If you are, send me an email at firstname.lastname@example.org and talk to me. I can be a listening ear for anything you wanna say. Seriously, I'd love to do anything I could to help you out.
P.S. You're an amazing writer!
Honestly, the world just chooses the worst times to dump on me. Like when giantessworld is on a cliffhanger.
Seriously, though, it's honestly just more dating issues. I know I should be used to it by now, but . . . I'm turning 23 this year, and I haven't had a single date that didn't ditch me or turn out to be a prank. I'm horrible for making my issues interfere with my writing, but . . . I don't know.
Choreo helps, really, and I try to stay positive, but honestly it's looking like this year won't be any better than last year. GiantessLover122, the user who was supposed to put up a second chapter to "Insect Nobility" (a project that was supposed to have 12 total users and 12 total chapters posted by the end of the year, a goal I thought was reasonable), has straight-up vanished on me, and I don't know where all my good ideas are going.
I'll try to at least resolve the cliffhanger soon. Promise.