Date: September 18 2015 4:34 PM Title: The start of something big
Watched the video, and I have to state that I think I'll enjoy the story. There is some 'info dump' in this chapter by the way. For example, what/who is holy Sh’toq? You haven't explain that. I hope Ta’Qur meets someone as nice as Anna.
First off thank you for the kinds words. Second Sh'Toq will be explained in ater chapters. Also I had intened to write three chapters to open the story, but it was taking too long so I posted what I had. The video won't really come into play untill the thrid chapter, so my apoloiges for that, but I will post the 2nd and 3rd chapter at the same time. Hopefully some time in the next 2-3 weeks. My schedule is quiet full so finding times to write is hard.