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Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

See, more reviews :-) I just wanted to give you 5 stars too because I konw you deserve it. Even if Im not into feet, I still love your work and am happye youre back <3

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I made the decision to revise the grammar of the story and make it all nice uniform past tense. The "ongoing situation" style was something I'd wanted to try, but led to some wierd mismatches and made it awkward. Also fixed some typos I didnt catch the first time around.

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome to see you posting again, you're one of my fav authors on here!



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Thanks! I really appreciate it!

I'm working on a few other stories too, so please look forward to those!

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

This was a fun little thing with a tight focus. You should post your stuff more often.



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Thanks! I went through and.made some fixes to make it read better, and am happy with the result.

 

I've got about three more concepts lined up, which I plan to work on releasing ocer the coming weeks.

Reviewer: OneInch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, what a great little story. Very well written, there should be more stories like this that are short and sweet, with a good plot and lots of detail. I would love to collaborate with you :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It's the first time I've written in some t8me, so I'm a bit rusty. Glad you enjoyed it!

IHd be well up for a collab at some point! Sounds like fun a340;(^o^)a295;

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