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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is interesting. I see Corey thinks like me, hard punishment is deserved, but what kind?
This must be hard for the family as well. What kind of treatment would help Corey.
In the Omega stories "Consequences" and "Tough Love" you did an excellent job at that. But this hard. What punishment can make it right?
The only thing that can make it right is if the preserve the dead woman's body and that it is somehow possible(couple of years later) to use the power of the PMRD device to bring the body back to life again. With condition that it has the absorb someones energy and that person is permanently shrunken to a certain size. The PRMD can still shrink that person, but he/she will never regain full hight again. Corey can than spend the rest of his life at 7 inch tall, but he will have saved that woman. A noble sacrifice. But that's just my idea.
I wonder how this story will develop.

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