[Report This]Date: October 27 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lovely foursome.
However, for some reason, it felt like they just did it, and with little dialogue I felt it was a bit too quick. I think if some screams or moans were added, it can show how much more powerful this scene was.
In fact, when Mo is looking at the three vaginas, I think that was the most vivid scene and most intimidating.
While all this is great I think we have to remember that none of these girls have the lightning bolt trimmed pubic hair. I was looking for that, but nope, none had it. (Must be Ms. Mackenzie).
I didn't even think that Mo was a virgin. Maybe it's just a steryotype in my head, but I tend to assume that these kids who smoke some weird shit and do all these things also experienced sex before or at least had some sexual play in their past.
Nonetheless, good chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
The girls just wanted to play. all the build up to heighten tension and then a quick release. you're right, no bolt yet though:D
Date: October 26 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Nice, very nice! I'm wondering if Mo will see any of the girl's other tinies, presuming that all those missing people must be divvied up amongst them and whomever they are saving Mo for. Perhaps a set of feet or two dangling from beneath each breast of one of the girls, while another set sticking out from one's butt crack or sown inside one of their panty liners. {Would they be there by force, or voluntarily after having begged? No need to take any of them out; but Mo could visit them stuck in each one's place (permanent place?????).}
Since it’s Elisha's room, she may want to get comfortable by slipping on a pair of tiny human flip-flops {Just a tiny spread eagle, face up, wrists tied out to their sides with the string going over the top of her foot with another string in the middle running down the top of her foot to a pouch around the back of their head wedged between her big and second toe; just like a real flip-flop but with a tiny instead of a sole under her foot/feet}
Again since it is Elisha's room, perhaps she has a tiny as a pet or one being tortured for her fun {Did Len ever come out, and intact or as Susannah's poop (living poop?) or is he still in her bowels, possible to stay in her for good}.
The story is going great. I've been meaning to post, been busy. Later!
Author's Response:
Good to hear from you again, glad you're still following this story. Haven't fully decided where this one is going yet, a couple of different options are currently tugging me in opposite directions. We shall see.