[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I call this "the initiation". The girls prep him up for whomever they will give him to.
This desicion based on who wants Tom not to be hurt remains a mystery. However, there's like 2 choices: Silke and Ms. Mackenzie. Not likely Mo's mom, or Tom's mom. You know what? I change my mind. It could be one of the Graces's moms! Now I'm excited. Obviously Ms. Mackenzie seems like the best choice as well as my preferred choice. Then it would be a mom of the Graces, and then Silke.
I believe it's Ms. Mackenize becuase she was talking to the girls earlier that same day. Ms. Mackenzie even has that "I'm sexy and I know it" look as she teases Mo in her classroom. I'm surprised she hasn't kept him for detention yet.
After-school talk is nothing. Make him alone with her. She's sitting at her desk. Mo doing his work on his desk. Ms. Mackenzie stands up, Mo looks up, she flashes a smile and walks to him, high heels clicking. She bends forward toward Mo and puts her outstretched arms on his desk. She says nothing but she smiles again. Mo can't help but give a small nervous chuckle. She then takes her arms off and walks behind and places her hands on his shoulders. She asks "how are you feeling today?" and Mo stutters. Ms. Mackenzie then walks to the side of Mo's desk and sits on it, her butt on top of his notebook. Mo reaches for his notebook, but Ms. Mackenzie stops him. "Uh uh uh, first you have to answer my question Morris. How are you feeling today?" After some time, Mo answers "um, good I guess." Ms. Mackenzie smiles. She likes this answer. She then asks him another question. "How would you like to help me out with some things?" She smiles, this time showing her perfect teeth. "Um, sure. I will be glad to." Mo carefully answers, unaware of what he's getting into. "Good" she responds. "She you tomorrow" she quickly says as she hops off Mo's desk. Mo then grabs his notebook, now warm, and heads into the hallway. He paused for a second and thought. "What just happened in there? Crap." He answers himself. Things could only get worse.
I love these characters! So fun to imagine!
Back to the plot. I guess fun time begins next chapter. Looks like Kimber is in charge.
Hey, Sussanah is back! Haven't seen her in a while.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Soon Tom, sooooon
[Report This]Date: October 22 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Pretty good, they seem kind of evil but at the same time not evil -evil- but more mischevous in their ways of trying to protect their secret...well they also ate somebody so who knows.
Author's Response:
Lol, there is always, you ate a dude, so halo might be a little tarnished, :)
Date: October 22 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
This kind of makes it seem like these girls have a business going on here, almost like they are contracted to shrink people and then sell them off to whoever contracted them to do it. They remind me of human traffickers, only with shrunken men.
Author's Response:
interesting idea for another story, :)