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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

Very curious to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

It appears Mo may be called to task for his eavesdropping

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

Society never suspects a girl of any crime these days. Even with super powers, they still aren't suspected. Not even these dissapearances. Surely his mother should get suspicious. Probably won't even think it's Elisha.

"Unexpected company"? More like "Expected company" or "fear becomes a reality". I was pretty sure these girls would show up. (When haven't they?) They always do! Like Tom, Mo is shrunk down in his own property.

What happened to that Susanah girl? Did she disappear? Graces become a two girl squad? Haven't seen her in like 5 chapters. Last thing I remember of her was swallowing that one dude who we met in chapter 1. She needs a reappearance soon.

Tom still making mistakes, again. He revealed Mo's secret to the Graces just to save his own skin I bet, so he won't suffer. He is now in Kimber's bra. If he didn't say the truth, would Kimber put him somewhere a bit lower? Or pass him to a different woman? We got options for Tom.

Lights went out. Aka, he shrunk. Question is, where does he wake up? That's what I'm excited for.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Enough foreplay now it's play time

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Jeez, these girls really ARE wolves in sheeps clothing! I can't believe they attacked him in his own comfort zone and with his mother around!



Author's Response:

They are definitely bold and without an apparent moral compass. We'll see how these young ladies are able to act with some degree of impunity 

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