Date: September 19 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Just finished reading this story. Quite original to me. I've never read one here that was based upon the theme of drug-induced reality.
Coming from British Columbia, I'm familiar with the names of several varieties of the green stuff, and was even once subjected to partial effects. But I'm allergic to the effects, and therefore know little else about the weed. That brings me to this question: What is 'Purple Kush"?
Author's Response:
As a fellow British Columbian Purple Kush was a variety that was popular in the Fraser Valley a few years back Hope you are enjoying the tale :)
Date: September 19 2015 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Tension building!!! I like how you are laying so much ground work, so that when anything happens it's been well foreshadowed.
It took me awhile; but I think I figured out the odor on Tom's hand. In the interest of not being a spoiler, I'll keep my guess to myself. Let's just say Optimus comes to mind.
Nine missing students, a principle and teacher missing, sounds like a lot of playthings. Two teachers mysteriously "retiring"; or were they "happily volunteering" { I sure would; but for whom and in what way??? }. Will Morris ever get a full accounting of all thirteen?
Not sure who may or may not experience Silke's butt close up and personal; or in what way {e.g. shrunken, transformed (ha hum) } or for that matter if she'd go about completely unaware, living her life and never knowing of any constant companion.
Your stories have so much to build on and directions to go. Once again, great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks you for your generous praise and support I really appreciate your commentary it helps me consider perspective as I try to keep the story fresh.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really nice to see some pot smoking done right in a story on here and the fact that the story is good is a bonus lol.
Really liking these characters and this plot.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks the story is starting to unfold
[Report This]Date: September 18 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
You know how killers/assassins always want to know their target and try to make a clean execution? Well, that's exactly what is going on.
These girls are going to corner Morris, lure him into a trap, and deny him of all resources as they make him beg for mercy.
Let's play this out. The Graces send Morris's family to some other country or business trip, vacation thing for month. Before they leave, the girls wipe their memory of Morris. Then the girls go to school and wipe the memory of Morris from everyone. Then they kidnap Morris, take him to their house and try to make love to him. Morris then let's his walls come down as he can't resist the hotness and when he is vulnerable, the Graces strike: they pin him down. One girl on each arm, the last one hovers over his mouth and shoves something down his throat. Morris gags, trying to get it out, but the girl puts her boobs on his face forcing him to suffocate and eventually he stops trying to cough it up. Morris becomes too tired to fight back, and the Graces tie him up. They force him to pleasure each one of them before finally they shrink him. They each take turns playing with Morris, before eventually one of them swallows them. As Morris goes down her throat, he hears them plan their next target; Tom.
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Man, writing that was fun. But basically, Morris is fucked.
Also, what up with Tom's hand? Since that's my character, I'm concerned. Is that some sort of tracking device from the girls, did they spray something on him.
Also, Tom is becoming stupid. (In both this story and Tom's story.) I just want to smack them in the face. Some giantess has to teach him some manners!
Very good chapter. It was funny, interesting, and adds more fuel to the fire that is Morris's "vision".
I can't wait for the next chapter!