Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

The build up is getting pretty intense, like an avalanche about to go over a cliff.  I notice all the "Midas touches" Morris is getting from the girls and one of his teachers.  Kimber touching him on the cheek.  Ms. Mackenzie putting her hand on his shoulder.  Susannah grabing his arm.  Has he been stung by them all and not know it yet?

 

Is Ms. Mackenzie one of the shrinkers?  Does she keep a "teacher's pet(s)" on {in???} her person?  That sure would explain any missing people reports over the years.

 

I have to admit, this story line has SO MANY possibilities that it's humbling to read such great work.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Forget the Graces, I just fell in love with Ms. Mackenzie. Wow, your description of her is so attractive.

She has the same gentleness and control of Karolina and I wouldn't mind spending detention with her. I would mind if she was my giantess owner, I mean wow, she sounds beautiful.

Did I mention that I had a thing for sexy teachers? I just love stories with sexy teachers that 'teach' young boys. Detention, after school chores, tutoring, private lessons in her home. Man, I haven't seen a hot teacher in a story in a long time.

My only story that I wrote on this site was based off a sexy teacher. This chapter gave me some good memories and ideas.

While the Graces seem to be portrayed as goddesses in human form, I would rather be with Ms. Mackenzie. (Unless these girls become even sexier to change my mind.)

Since we saw a character die, does this mean that Morris, Tom and Sly will all die to these women? If the Tom character dies to a Grace that's ok. If Tom dies to a bird that thought he was a snack, then that's not ok. Lol. But if Tom dies to Ms. Mackenzie then that's the way to go. (That's assuming these characters will eventually die. If not, then ignore the death part I mentioned.)

If they don't die, then you know who I want to see end up with Tom. (Tom has Ms. Mackenzie as a teacher too, right?)

I have a feeling that each Grace will get a guy, so I don't think it will happen my way, but it won't be that bad, because these girls are Janine sexy.

Wait a minute. The Graces are Janine, and Ms. Mackenzie is Karolina! This story is the opposite of Tom's story. Morris's story deals more with the girls, while Tom deals with the adult woman. Both stories also start in a classroom setting. We got teens flirting with each other and while Tom in Tom's story willingly goes to Janine, Morris on the other hand will be hunted by the girls and these girls are going to come for him. Things are starting to make sense now.

I can't wait for the next chapter!