[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yep as I thought, more are getting obliviously roped into this unbelievable tale. The more folks Tom tells I'm sure the worse it'll finally be when the trap is sprung.
Len was shrunk for spreading false-tales, so what'll happen to Tom for spreading true-tales?
Whatever the case, the girls are doing a great job of setting up an eerie goosebumps kinda vibe around the protagonist :D
I'm curious as to whether Tom'll be saved for last but throughout the day, the people he shared his unbelievable story with will start disappearing xD
Author's Response:
Trying to heighten the suspense for poor Mo as he tries to find a rational explanation for an irrational situation, he may be inadvertantly drawing more flies to the spider's web, we'll see :)
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Just as I predicted! Tom and Sly didn't believe a word!
When Sly said that he wished to be swallowed, Tom also said that he wants to be swallowed. Is this a foreshadowing of some vore?
Wow, I love how these super sexy girls are stalking and preying on this kid Morris. I bet these girls do know Morris saw them. Why? Because most guys would just melt if they came in contact with them. Morris however retreats in fear. Checkmate. The girls know.
I can't wait for the next chapter!